NOW the BG brings to light...^-^ Hmm...just a bit more on the last page would have made all the difference there. But this is great. Too much in the first bubble--woulda been better to tinker with the wording a lil (eek, I know your writer from TPOP and...eeek! T_T I'm sorry, SaiRong...) OR have split it off into another bubble. Just...too much in that one. I think the panel with his arm around her is my favorite--just because you did their backs so well! ^-^ Could have put juuuust a bit more to the chairs, though, they look a lil bare.
The last panel--ALMOST, I say! ALMOST! The outline was just a LIIIIIIIL too thick. Especially compared to everything else. ^-^ Okies?
Keep it coming, UglyKitten! I'm glad you like the story so far, and I appreciate your constructive criticism (it’s the only way we’ll get better). So don't worry, I won't stalk you on the TP forums XD.
UglyKitten - Thanks for your constructive crit as well, I appreciate it. I can agree to everything you brought up except the last panel, I actually made the outline thick on purpose.
Author Comments:
pockymonster, 27 Jun 2006 09:04 am
took me FOREVAAAAR and i'm still not pleased with it's outcome. Oh well, what can ya do?
User Comments:
Avatar pwnz, 27 Jun 2006 09:43 am
Abt_Nihil, 27 Jun 2006 09:44 am
Love the title "3.14 fun things to do with pi" :3
teurastaa, 27 Jun 2006 07:49 pm
UglyKitten, 28 Jun 2006 03:34 am
The last panel--ALMOST, I say! ALMOST! The outline was just a LIIIIIIIL too thick. Especially compared to everything else. ^-^ Okies?
SaiRong, 28 Jun 2006 05:40 am
pockymonster, 28 Jun 2006 03:21 pm