though I'm not entirely pleased with this page either (and I guess I feel that way one way or another with all my artwork), I like how it came out better than the last few pages.
aaaah heehee this is so crazyyyyy :D yo uthink it's a dream then this turns out to be a drea? so wich is real and wich is fake!? who knows and youre pages are great so stop saying that UoU
I'm rather liking this page...but the bubbles...o.o...heh. ^^; I have much crit on bubbles, for some odd reason. In the third panel, his little "speech"...you might have broken that up into two bubbles--or even two panels. The table was a little blank more toward "us".
I have a bit of fuss with the last panel--it seems to me that he's going "do-wha???" to her saying it wasn't his fault. The picture is fine...but switching the bubbles' contents here would have been a lot more clear. ^_^
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pockymonster, 03 Jul 2006 01:36 pm
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teurastaa, 08 Jul 2006 11:51 pm
UglyKitten, 16 Jul 2006 04:42 am
I have a bit of fuss with the last panel--it seems to me that he's going "do-wha???" to her saying it wasn't his fault. The picture is fine...but switching the bubbles' contents here would have been a lot more clear. ^_^
Dollie-chan, 19 Jul 2007 03:57 pm
EEEEKKK! So cute <3